13 of My Bad Writing Habits
1. “I’ve got” — yes, I talk like this, but gah, no one should write that way.
2. She verbed. / He verbed. — this is probably my favorite sentence structure. I know why, but breaking a decade+ of habit is hard.
3. Initial -ing phrasing. — If it doesn’t start with one, it’s the other.
4. suddenly, quietly, etc — not as bad as they used to be, but so much simpler to get the meaning across. Oh…. Show.. don’t TELL. Got it.
5. Lord INSERT_NAME_HERE — Ugh. Can we say cardboard nobility? Ok, so it’s not just for nobles any more. Still too many characters to name.
6. see/saw/hear/heard/feel/felt/looked/watched — Zzzzzzzz!
7. repeated words/phrases — What? It worked fine the last sentence? *sigh*
8. smiled, coughed, frowned, raising eyebrows, wringing hands — weak! overused! Boring… but so easy to slip in there.
9. would, could — not enough in the moment?
10. had verbed — again my head never seems to be in the moment at hand
11. word choice — close, only counts in horseshoes and hand grenades. *I* know what I meant.
12. scene setting — what? can’t you just picture it? I did… *sigh*
13. it/there and other generic nouns — Umm. yeah. There’s something about it that’s just way too easy to slip it in there without thinking. *scuffle*
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